I need your feedback. I have given a villain in book 3 two names by mistake: Carter Wills and Clifford Wills. Which name do you think is better?
Also, please tell me how you feel if a villain uses bad language? Would it make you want to put the book down?
Again, does sex that isn't too explicit embarrass you? Doyou want more explicit sex? How much detail do you want? I think most women like a spicy novel, but they don't want it too graphic. Do you agree? I'm trying to gauge these things so I don't offend my readers. So please tell me how you feel.